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At Fri, 01 Jul 2005 01:02:42 +0900,
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   <sect2 id="doc">
 <sect1 id="upgrade">

===================================================================
   <sect2 id="doc">
     <title>Documentation</title>
 
-    <para>To reduce duplication of information (and subsequent
-      difficulty in maintaining consistency), many instances of
-      specific devices supported in the Hardware Notes have been moved
-      to system manual pages.  This project is ongoing as of this
-      release.</para>
-
-    <para>A Turkish (tr_TR.ISO8859-9) translation project has been
-      started.</para>
+    <para>Documentation of existing functionality has been improved by
+      the addition of the following manual pages: &man.ataraid.4;,
+      &man.bus.space.9;,
+      &man.devfs.conf.5, &man.devfs.rules.5,
+      &man.pmap.page.init.9;,
+      &man.pthread.atfork.3;,
+      &man.sched.4bsd.4;, &man.sched.ule.4;, &man.snd.fm801.4;,
+      &man.snd.neomagic.4;, &man.snd.via8233.4;, &man.snd.via82c686.4;,
+      and &man.snd.vibes.4;.</para>
+
+    <para>Manual pages in the base system have received a number of
+      cleanups, both for content and presentation.  Cross-references
+      are more correct and consistent, standard section headings are
+      now used throughout, and markup has been cleaned up.</para>
+
+    <para>The following manual pages, which were derived from RFCs
+      and possibly violate the IETF's copyrights, have been replaced:
+      &man.gai.strerror.3;,
+      &man.getaddrinfo.3;,
+      &man.getnameinfo.3;,
+      &man.inet6.opt.init.3;,
+      &man.inet6.option.space.3;,
+      &man.inet6.rth.space.3;,
+      &man.inet6.rthdr.space.3;,
+      &man.icmp6.4;, and
+      &man.ip6.4;.  &merged;</para>
 
   </sect2>
-
 </sect1>
 
 <sect1 id="upgrade">
   <title>Upgrading from previous releases of &os;</title>
 
-  <para>Users with existing &os; systems are
-    <emphasis>highly</emphasis> encouraged to read the <quote>Early
-    Adopter's Guide to &os; &release.current;</quote>.  This document generally has
-    the filename <filename>EARLY.TXT</filename> on the distribution
-    media, or any other place that the release notes can be found.  It
-    offers some notes on upgrading, but more importantly, also
-    discusses some of the relative merits of upgrading to &os;
-    5.<replaceable>X</replaceable> versus running &os;
-    4.<replaceable>X</replaceable>.</para>
+  <para>Source upgrades to &os; &release.current; are only supported
+    from &os; 5.3-RELEASE or later.  Users of older systems wanting to
+    upgrade &release.current; will need to update to &os; 5.3 or newer
+    first, then to &os; &release.current;.</para>
 
   <important>
     <para>Upgrading &os; should, of course, only be attempted after
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+++ new.sgml	Sat Jul  2 13:43:51 2005
@@ -975,29 +975,44 @@
   <sect2 id="doc">
     <title>$B%I%-%e%a%s%F!<%7%g%s(B</title>
 
-    <para>$B>pJs$N=EJ#$r$J$/$7!"FbMF4IM}$N8zN(2=$r$O$+$k$?$a!"(B
-      $B%O!<%I%&%'%"%N!<%H$K$"$k!"(B
-      $BFCDj%G%P%$%9$N5-=R$r%7%9%F%`$N%^%K%e%"%k%Z!<%8$K0\F0$7$^$7$?!#(B
-      $B$3$N%j%j!<%9$N;~E@$G!"$3$N:n6H$O$^$@?J9TCf$G$9!#(B</para>
+    <para>$B2<5-%^%K%e%"%k%Z!<%8$,DI2C$5$l$F!"4{B8$N5!G=$NJ8=q2=$,2~A1$5(B
+      $B$l$^$7$?!#(B
+      &man.ataraid.4;,
+      &man.bus.space.9;,
+      &man.devfs.conf.5, &man.devfs.rules.5,
+      &man.pmap.page.init.9;,
+      &man.pthread.atfork.3;,
+      &man.sched.4bsd.4;, &man.sched.ule.4;, &man.snd.fm801.4;,
+      &man.snd.neomagic.4;, &man.snd.via8233.4;, &man.snd.via82c686.4;,
+      and &man.snd.vibes.4;.</para>
+
+    <para>$B%Y!<%9%7%9%F%`Cf$N%^%K%e%"%k%Z!<%8$K!"FbMF$HI=<(N>LL$K$*$$$F(B
+      $BB?$/$N8+D>$7$,2C$($i$l$^$7$?!#Aj8_;2>H$O$h$j@53N$G0l4S$7$?$b$N$K(B
+      $B$J$j!"I8=`@a8+=P$7$,DL$7$F;H$o$l$k$h$&$K$J$j!"%^!<%/%"%C%W$,8+D>(B
+      $B$5$l$^$7$?!#(B</para>
+
+    <para>RFC $B$+$iGI@8$7!"(BIETF $B$NCx:n8"$r?/32$7$F$$$k2DG=@-$N$"$k!"0J(B
+      $B2<$N%^%K%e%"%k%Z!<%8$,CV$-49$($i$l$^$7$?!#(B
+      &man.gai.strerror.3;,
+      &man.getaddrinfo.3;,
+      &man.getnameinfo.3;,
+      &man.inet6.opt.init.3;,
+      &man.inet6.option.space.3;,
+      &man.inet6.rth.space.3;,
+      &man.inet6.rthdr.space.3;,
+      &man.icmp6.4;, and
+      &man.ip6.4;.  &merged;</para>
 
-    <para>$B%H%k%38l(B (tr_TR.ISO8859-9) $BK]Lu%W%m%8%'%/%H$,3+;O$7$^$7$?!#(B</para>
   </sect2>
 </sect1>
 
 <sect1 id="upgrade">
   <title>$BA0$N%j%j!<%9$N(B &os; $B$+$i$N%"%C%W%0%l!<%I(B</title>
 
-  <para>$B8=B8$9$k(B &os; $B%7%9%F%`$+$i%"%C%W%0%l!<%I$9$k%f!<%6$O(B
-    <quote>&os; &release.current; $B=i4|MxMQ<T$N$?$a$N<j0z$-(B</quote>
-    $B$rFI$`$3$H$r(B <emphasis>$B6/$/(B</emphasis> $B?d>)$7$^$9!#(B
-    $B$3$NJ8=q$O!"DL>o(B <filename>EARLY.TXT</filename> $B$H$$$&L>A0$G(B
-    $BG[I[J*$K<}O?$5$l$F$*$j!"(B
-    $B$^$?!"B>$N%j%j!<%9%N!<%H$,CV$+$l$F$$$k$H$3$m$K$b0l=o$KCV$+$l$F$$$^$9!#(B
-    $B$3$N<j0z$K$O%"%C%W%0%l!<%I;~$KCm0U$rJ'$&$Y$-E@$K2C$(!"(B
-    $B$5$i$K=EMW$J>pJs$H$7$F!"(B
-    &os; 4.<replaceable>X</replaceable> $B%7%9%F%`$r;H$$B3$1$k>l9g$H(B
-    &os; 5.<replaceable>X</replaceable> $B$X$N%"%C%W%0%l!<%I$7$?>l9g$N!"(B
-    $B$=$l$>$l$NMxE@$K$D$$$F$N$^$H$a$,=q$+$l$F$$$^$9!#(B</para>
+  <para>&os; &release.current; $B$X$N%=!<%9%3!<%I$rMQ$$$?%"%C%W%0%l!<%I(B
+    $B$O(B &os; 5.3-RELEASE $B0J9_$N$_BP1~$7$F$$$^$9!#8E$$%7%9%F%`$NMxMQ<T$G(B
+    &release.current; $B$K%"%C%W%0%l!<%I$7$?$$J}$O!"$^$:(B &os; 5.3 $B0J9_$K(B
+    $B99?7$7$F$+$i!"(B&os; &release.current; $B$K99?7$7$F$/$@$5$$!#(B</para>
 
   <important>
     <para>&os; $B$N%"%C%W%0%l!<%I$O!"$b$A$m$s!"(B
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